Kuija-WindWalker

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June 17th, 2015, 5:14 am

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I'M BACK AND I'M ON CRACK!(Not really.)

ShadowSaiyanXD
Posted by ShadowSaiyanXD
June 17th, 2015, 6:08 am
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This comic is back...ish. I'll be updating more soon.
Credit:
Max and Rai, Black blob (C) ShadowSaiyanXD
Backgrounds(C)Respected Owner/s
Please Fav,Rate,Watch,Comment.


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Ah, good.

witswithme
Posted by witswithme
June 17th, 2015, 7:06 am
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You're back. I was startin' to worry.



TouhouShake
Posted by TouhouShake
June 17th, 2015, 10:46 am
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The sentences look too close together and some of the punctuation looks off in some of the pages.


That, and his brother's sprites are so weird in color and looks, it literally kept me eyeing him more then the text.


Edit: Also, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=__ccQl27V8M



Posted by Kinny (Guest)
June 17th, 2015, 11:13 am
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The Tone is a bit chaotic in this Page.
It goes from Serious with the Hypnotic discussion, then a seemingly Selfish yanking of the Topic to the Fox guys Birthday preparations. Then before they even get a good Flow going, Sudden cliffhanger Attack from an unknown Foe.
I strongly recommend you reaearch Pacing.



ShadowSaiyanXD
Posted by ShadowSaiyanXD
June 17th, 2015, 4:38 pm
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@Kinny: I'm still an novice when it comes to presenting the story but, I'll try and keep it at a steady pace.
@TouhouShake: Thanks you the info on the punctuation.I've been making some mistakes
and, as for Rai's sprites are arms the problem
or the clothes?



TouhouShake
Posted by TouhouShake
June 17th, 2015, 5:50 pm
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@ShadowSaiyanXD: Both. The arms especially. Also, you may want to check that link, someone's been playing steal the sprites of Maxxy.

JUST SO YOU KNOW.



Yeah.

witswithme
Posted by witswithme
June 17th, 2015, 7:46 pm
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@TouhouShake: I noticed. how'd you come across that?



ShadowSaiyanXD
Posted by ShadowSaiyanXD
June 17th, 2015, 11:45 pm
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@TouhouShake: I know.Tried asking him about it but,he hasn't replied.



TouhouShake
Posted by TouhouShake
June 18th, 2015, 4:10 pm
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@witswithme: I was looking up sonic sprite series stuff on YT hoping to find something decent.

Turns out that I found a piece of gold in that pile. Sadly, it was fool's gold~ And Max was in even more of this guy's video's too, playing as some wolf's brother.

GuessanimalmixesarenaturalintheSonicuniverse,huh~

@ShadowSaiyanXD: I don't think he really knows either(and even if he did, I'd think he might try to play bluff on you with him). Try looking for someone with your chara in the comment section of the vid, that I believe is the gy who claimed to "own" Max under another unoriginal name.

Or at least try to hide your work from other's sneaking eyes so this doesn't happen again.



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